We are learning to write similes.
Today Room 10 used photos as motivation for creating similes that describe people.
Her hair looks like a clown's wig, all bushy and knotty. By Diamond
Her skin looks like wrinkly old paper flying around. By Ivoryana
She looks like a yucky old zombie but wrinklier and scarier. By Tioni
Her skin is so wrinkly it looks like she has been in the pool for three years. By Sharniqua
Her face looks like a witch. By Shane
Her hair looks like a nest broken in half. By Gregory
The old lady's hair was as gigantic as a giant. By Paige
Her skin looks like wrinkly old paper flying around. By Ivoryana
She looks like a yucky old zombie but wrinklier and scarier. By Tioni
Her skin is so wrinkly it looks like she has been in the pool for three years. By Sharniqua
Her face looks like a witch. By Shane
Her hair looks like a nest broken in half. By Gregory
The old lady's hair was as gigantic as a giant. By Paige
We are looking forward to writing poems using similes that describe ourselves.
Watch this space!
Hi room 10 love your assembly my favourite part was when you brung the teachers on the stage.by kaz
ReplyDeleteThank you Kaz. We liked watching the teachers dance too, especially Mr Lyth's moves!
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